interesting...
I have a few suggestions:
1) Paragraghs please. It really helps to make it look much more organized.
2) Grammar check. Type it up in your everyday friendly neighborhood word processor and try grammar check. it helps locate missing words and other glaring mistakes.
3) Work with the words. Rather than being obvious and saying "Seedot was twice as strong then torchic and was a uneven match." be more subtle, for example, "Zack's Seedot was huge, almost twice as large as Torchic. Torchic cowered in fear as Seedot let loose its first attack."
Of course that could do with a little more work, but it's just a short example.
4) Add details. How old is Chucky? Is there a reason why he lives alone? Descriptions descriptions descriptions.
5) Try again. I'm not trying to be negative; this could potentially be a cool story. However, you may want to consider rewriting, using this (what you have posted) as a base. Rework some sentences, add more fluff and details, add paragraghs.
I like the idea. Your dialogue is also pretty good. Zack comes off as a real jerk, and i think that's how you wanted it to be.
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